Liquid crystals falling free
From her broken spirit’s draining se
Watering beauty of what used to be
Mourning the death of an eternity
Dawn’s anticipation, dusk’s passion
All merged in a teary picture of a fading past
Sunrise and midnight
All blurred in her swimming eyes
Into bittersweet remembrance
The pieces have fallen into time and circumstance
The petals are falling
Slow dancing with her seeping soul
Falling
Her life before her eyes
Falling
Her heart to the ground
Falling
Hands of sweet caresses
Falling
Teardrops on the roses
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This is a sad though nice one this valentine. Have a great weekend.
Tye, this is so beautifully sad. It resonates with me. Thanks
Thanks Myne! Hope you had a blast this weekend!
Thanks Nana!
Beautiful from start to finish. *sigh* kudos!
Thanks Nita! I find pain an intriguing emotion...there's something beautiful about it's intensity, no? (I'M NOT SADISTIC! lol)
I like the 'falling' repetition best. Nice write up!
Thanks, Tade!
i like the subtlety of her sadness.
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