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Teardrops on Roses

Liquid crystals falling free
From her broken spirit’s draining se
Watering beauty of what used to be
Mourning the death of an eternity

Dawn’s anticipation, dusk’s passion
All merged in a teary picture of a fading past
Sunrise and midnight
All blurred in her swimming eyes
Into bittersweet remembrance

The pieces have fallen into time and circumstance
The petals are falling
Slow dancing with her seeping soul
Her life before her eyes
Her heart to the ground
Hands of sweet caresses
Teardrops on the roses

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Myne Whitman said...

This is a sad though nice one this valentine. Have a great weekend.

Nana Yaa Boatemaa said...

Tye, this is so beautifully sad. It resonates with me. Thanks

Tye said...

Thanks Myne! Hope you had a blast this weekend!

Tye said...

Thanks Nana!

JuaNita said...

Beautiful from start to finish. *sigh* kudos!

Tye said...

Thanks Nita! I find pain an intriguing emotion...there's something beautiful about it's intensity, no? (I'M NOT SADISTIC! lol)

Anonymous said...

I like the 'falling' repetition best. Nice write up!

Tye said...

Thanks, Tade!

lizzy said...

i like the subtlety of her sadness.

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