Brown Sugar,
When I look in the caramel pools of your eyes
I see depths of mysteries I want to explore
A cryptic beauty that intrigues me
And a soul that wields an alluring essence
Brown Sugar,
When you touch me, your hands of delicate beauty
Leave me with a lingering sweetness
Sensations and memories that leave me infinitely giddy
Your lovely hands I wish would caress me, oh so tenderly
Brown Sugar,
I love making you smile
And hearing you laugh, even for a while
And yearn to let my fingers play in your hair
And stare into your eternal eyes
So Brown Sugar,
Will you let me?
Do say you will…
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woah, like hell yeah she would after reading this :P
Long time no hear man.
Nicely done as always. Sugar-caramel- sweet!
Nicely done yeah, me likey.
those last two stanzas are fantastic.
lazy blogger......but cant hate u coz u've still got it!
did she let you?
Juanita! True, it has been a while, and it is my fault but I REFUSE to accept any responsibility for my actions :)....And there you go again inflating my head till my glasses can barely fit on my face :D Thanks!
Thanks Myne...as always, me likey when you likey ;)
Why thank you Coweh! You just made my night equally fantastic!
Aww P, man! Thanks bruv, you know you've got it too!
Oh etoile, hmmm...let's say she never knew...circumstances were not encouraging :(
What a poem! If it weren't for the fact you're probably younger than me... haha But you write with a lot of feeling. Whoever this Brown Sugar is, is a lucky girl! ;)
Anonymous, :D! You just made turn a deep shade of orange! Thank you. Thank you.
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