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Vindictive

Doesn’t it make you sad to think

That everywhere you touch her

I’ve touched her there before

And every time you taste he lips

I’ve tasted them before

And even though she likes you now

She used to like me more?

18 expressions:

MouthedEaglet said...

oh..........dang!!! Dat'll sting. Nice. :D

JuaNita said...

Hisss..why burst my bubble ehn? lool I kid. Me likey!

Repressed One said...

Ouch!! That's just....mean! lol

Tye said...

Welcome MouthedEaglet! It bites, doesn't it? lol, and thanks!

Tye said...

Lol, Nita. me likey that you likey :)
PS: Check your mail!

Tye said...

Bienvenido Repressed One! I know, I know ;) *evil laugh*

Nana Yaa Boatemaa said...

Ouch and ouch!!! I'll remember to never cross you Tye. I love it though. LOL

Tye said...

LOL, NYB! You better remember ;) And I'm glad you like it.

ktalent said...

hehe you're welcome. Tnx for droppin by too.

(p.s: don't mind the name change, it's mouthedeaglet here)

Tye said...

=D, ktalent.

Ghana_Hall_of_Shame said...

I've been reading this since you posted it. I figured it could be coming from one of two places. From the guy who knows the girl still wants him although they split up, or from the guy that thinks he can do without the girl but still enjoys day-dreams of the good times they had.
I know now, after reading "Shards of My Shattered Heart".

You paint a clear picture with words.
Mike

Paapa said...

short, but sharp.

Tye said...

Thanks, Mike! Care to share your conclusions on which profile the poet/persona fits?

Tye said...

Thanks P! If history had played out differently, this could have been directed at you. :)

Mike said...

The Poet's way of dealing with the fact that someone else is doing what he used to enjoy doing is to turn it around and tell himself he's been there done that.
The sweetest part is that if she came crawling back, he'd take her and treat her better than the last time around. (that's how some very strong relationships start)

Tye said...

...*smile*...food for thought...the Poet just might treat her better than the last time...Thanks Mike, do drop by here more often!

Mike said...

Aww You are too kind. I will. You write very well and that keeps me coming back.

Tye said...

Thanks, Mike. YOU are too kind :)

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